STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT |
In the published book, there's a time jump between the end of Chapter Six, which takes place in the morning, and Chapter Seven, which takes place that night, with a mention that the main characters were driving all day. Below are two missing chapters, retitled Chapters 6A and 6B, which were originally part of Chapters Thirteen and Fourteen of the long version and which show a bit of what the hero and heroine were up to in those missing hours. These scenes don't serve any real purpose from a plot perspective. The main reason they were written was because there was a great deal going on with the subplots and secondary characters at the same time. Rather than have the main characters disappear for fifty pages, I included these scenes to keep them center stage. Once the subplots were cut and the supporting cast trimmed, these scenes were no longer needed and some of the first cuts I made. |
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She didn't say anything when they stopped to refuel. But when she noticed he was about to pull off the highway again just a couple hours later, she shot up in her seat. "We're stopping for gas again?" It wasn't even noon. Ross swung the sedan off of the highway and into the truck stop just off the exit ramp. She glanced back in her mirror as he pulled in next to one of the pumps. No one followed them in. That didn't mean they weren't there. "Unless you want to start walking, yeah. This baby's a classic. She wasn't exactly made with fuel conservation in mind." "I guess speed wasn't a priority then either." The old sedan might have saved them, but it wasn't fast about it. Or maybe it just felt that way. "She was probably quite the speedster in her day. Somebody hasn't been doing a very good job taking care of her." "How did I know you'd refer to the car as a woman?" He cut off the engine. It coughed and sputtered for a few seconds before going silent. He shot her a lazy grin. "When she's this temperamental? What else could she be?" But this. She knew it was unlikely they'd managed to catch up this soon. That didn't quell the instinct that told her he had her as helpless as a sitting duck. She still couldn't force herself to relax. Rubbing at her chained wrist, she stared out across the pavement. The storms had cleared long ago, leaving a sunny autumn day in its wake. The blacktop gleamed in the sunlight. The truck stop was less bustling than she would have expected in the middle of a weekday. It looked like there were about sixteen pumps on this side of the convenience mart and restaurant situated in the middle, with another sixteen on the other side, all beneath a high cover of lights. No more than four of the pumps had vehicles next to them. The fueling stations for the semis and larger trucks were located in front of them. Ross had pulled in away from any other vehicles. Not that it mattered. She wouldn't have been able to catch anyone's attention without him intervening. She exhaled slowly, refusing to give into her frustration and hit something. He'd just love that. She wasn't about to give him the satisfaction. She heard the gas pump click off and then the sound of the nozzle being withdrawn from the tank. Another eternity passed while he screwed the gas cap back in and made his way around the car. He stopped beside her window and leaned down to eye level. She didn't move to open the window. "I mean it, Allie," he said, lifting his voice to be heard through the glass. "Be good." She scowled at him. It seemed to be the reaction he was looking for. A spark of amusement lit in his eyes. He nodded tightly and moved away. She watched him stroll toward the convenience mart until a larger, heavyset man moved into line behind him, cutting him off from view. So cocky. He really did think he had her under his thumb. The worst part was that he did. Damn. There had to be a way out. Someone tapped on the window at her side, twice in quick succession. She jumped and jerked toward the sound. A man stood there peering in at her. He motioned for her to roll down the window. She sized him up in a glance. She revised her opinion of the man she'd seen in the motel parking lot. This was the guy she wouldn't want to meet anywhere, in an alley or in broad daylight. He was big and burly, the cutoff sleeves of his flannel shirt revealing arms thick with fat instead of muscle. He had a stomach to match. He may have been handsome once, but now he had all the attractiveness of a high school jock who'd gone to seed. There was that same kind of hunger and cockiness in his expression. He had his cap pulled down low on his brow, probably to block out the sun's glare, but it also kept her from seeing his eyes clearly. What she could see was hardly reassuring. He was the kind of guy who didn't take no for an answer. She knew the type. But she didn't know him. He wasn't one of the men from the parking lot that morning. His body shape was all wrong. More important, he wasn't Taylor. No, just your garden variety perv. She and Eddie both jerked their heads up. Ross. She should have known. |
CHAPTER 6B |
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"Do you even know where we are?" "The possibility of death versus the certainty of it? Yeah. That does sound better. At least with him I would have had a chance." Some of the anger went out of him. His hands loosened their death grip on the steering wheel. "It'd be a lot easier to take you serious if you'd tell me what's going on." She focused on the flat, endless stretch of road in front of them, avoiding his eyes. Some secrets had to be kept. "Careful, Ross. Somebody might actually think you care." She heard him exhale sharply. "Whatever. You have plenty of time to think about it now that I'm going to be taking the long route. It was one thing to have Taylor on our tail without adding your boyfriend to it." "He's probably still back at the truck stop cradling his broken nose." "And his gouged eyes," he noted wryly. "Them too." She tipped her head and looked at him. "Why'd you punch him anyway? You could have just flashed your bounty hunter badge or whatever and told him I'm a criminal you're taking in. He'd never know it wasn't true. But you didn't. Why is that?" "Because he pissed me off." "Uh huh. You want to know what I think?" "No." "I think you couldn't because you don't have your bounty hunter badge on you or whatever. You left your coat back at the motel. You don't have your ID anymore, do you?" He hesitated a fraction too long. "Well," she said with no small sense of satisfaction. "Isn't this interesting?" No badge. No warrant. They were lucky he'd tucked his wallet in the duffel bag before coming back into the motel room. More importantly, if he couldn't prove he was a bounty hunter, he couldn't even pretend that she was a criminal he was taking in. "Don't even think about it. I've had enough out of you today. One more stunt like that and I'll tie you up and dump you in the trunk for the rest of the trip." Eddie aside, she was getting closer every time. It wouldn't be long now.
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